Hi,
This paper would be a buildoff/revision of the preivous paper. (the second version) It is attached as “paper 3 turn in.” I need a “level 5” paper turn in this time. Please follow the rubric under pdf titled “Phil166_Rubric for Philosophical Papers_V1.pdf” and also reference the “Guidelines on writing philosophical papers” to see what a level 5 paper is. To get a level 5 paper the paper needs to do everything that is in the “Phil166_Rubric for Philosophical Papers_V1.pdf: so please pay extra attention to that.
Please apply all the comments and make the revisions necesarry to the previous parts of the paper, reference pdf with “comnents on paper 3 turn in.” Revisions/changes can be made, but if the material that was written before is good (doesn’t have any comments/doesn’t need any revision to achieve a level 5″ then we can leave it. So, for example first comment says there is no clear definition of white ignorance, that needs to be added/adjusted in the paper for me to be able to get a level 5. ALL COMMENTSE MUST BE FOLLOWED, SO IF IT SAYS SOMETHING NEEDS TO BE EXPLAIN, EXPLAIN IT/ADD CITATION.
I also attached a sample level 5 paper so you can see an example of what it looks like. Also attached the original paper if it is needed.
Topic is fine the way it is, but it needs to be adjusted/rewritten to fit in with ALL of the previous comments that were left in the comments on paper 3 turn in.
THIS IS MY LAST CHANCE TO ATTAIN LEVEL 5.
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9 hours ago
**some comments say that the topic is fine but some of the thought process within the topic need to be revisited. refer to last comment: need to develop points more carefully. in particular, you haven’t shown that white ignorance applies to this issue because anti-lockdown protests might for all you say happen with full knowledge that they will harm black americans.” if white ignorance isn’t able to be applied to this issue, you are welcome to tweak the issue/change the paper so i’m able to achieve level 5.
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