VR tourism

Here is the comment about my dissertation:
There is also some evidence of academic malpractice, with portions of texts that are similar to other sources, with words swapped with synonyms.

STRENGTHS:

The dissertation references some interesting literature, as well as some areas of potential academic interest, such as VR tourism. These could serve as a narrower, more accessible, and therefore more appropriate focus for a rewrite. The choice of case studies as method is also potentially appropriate, once the aims of the study are clarified and the choice of case study is motivated.

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