This is a thesis paper and I am having a significant brain block in completing this work correctly. I did meet with someone to review my paper from school and it was explained to me that my paper was very weak. It would not be a passing paper. I would like someone to rewrite the entire paper to be more professionally sound based on the Student version of the 7th Ed APA style. Please check my paper to see the idea I was going with it overall. I have a list of resources I have been using and please add other sources you might find helpful to add to the paper. I have uploaded both my paper and the corrections that would be needed. I am trying to graduate from the program and this would be helpful.
Bipolar Disorder is a debilitating mood disorder in which the disorder is episodic and repetitive alternating between mania and depression. These episodes can have a significant negative impact on the life of an individual and support system. (Can the thesis be corrected as well).
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