My Personal Narrative

The prompt given to me was to talk about why ive decided to learn online and finish with pennfoster, in order to get my highschool diploma. And i decided to learn online because of the comfortable learning environment, and convenience and flexibility. But start off with talking about something personal like I felt like an outcast going to my public highschool. It was a very tough time for me personally and I struggled making friends.
Does my introduction attempt to hook the reader?
Does my essay have a clear and specific thesis statement?
Does my essay accurately tell my story?
Does my essay indicate why I’m telling my story?
Have I described only my own experiences?
Have I used the first-person point of view (the pronoun “I”) throughout the essay?
Have I clearly indicated where paragraphs begin and end?
Does each of my paragraphs support my thesis statement?
Does my conclusion summarize and give closure to my essay?
Have I effectively proofread my essay?
Have I met the length requirement?
Is my essay formatted according to the instructions?
Should be able to answer yes to every question when its completely and 100% ready.

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