Enjoying Poetry: How I went from hating poetry in high school to enjoying it in college.

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Hey! My favorite Abdulrahman!
Thanks for sharing your reflections on the course.
I am glad to hear about the many positive changes you have experienced – especially in contrast to your negative high school experience with poetry.
Thanks for paying attention, being astonished, and telling about it!
While the basic structure of your essay is good, it might clarify things for your reader if each of your supporting points is in its own paragraph.
Good writing is telling stories! A.S.D.! Add specific details!
If you fill out your essay with specific details of your journey, your words and your experience have the chance of coming alive to the reader!
If you check out the Turnitin feedback, you should see my questions all along the way.
Then, you will be ready to move on to Step 3….
First, go and reread FP 16.5 Step 3 Next, read your paper aloud to yourself and listen to what you are saying and how you are saying it. Can you say it any better? Is there anything you want to add?
Share your paper with a couple of classmates, friends, or family members and ask them for feedback.
Then, make any final adjustments or additions , resubmit your best work in FP 16.5 Step 3 Submit, and we are good to go!
Grace and peace,
NPH

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