Based on the features of academic language (recommendations for using academic language in writing) that we have discussed, identify 2-3 places that need revision.

This assignment asks you to revise a draft that you have completed for this course. You can choose to work on the following draft: C/C final draft.

Review the PowerPoint from 8/3 on Academic Language.
Based on the features of academic language (recommendations for using academic language in writing) that we have discussed, identify 2-3 places that need revision.
Identity the draft that you are revising, and write a response (100 words+) to:
identify the original sentences that need to be revised (2-3 places)
provide your revisions
explain the reason why you made each revision
optional question: briefly reflect on what you have learned about academic language

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