Operation Daniel

Answer the following questions about the essay.

Introduction:
Does the writer provide a “hook” or attention-getting device?
Is there a background statement about dystopian societies?
Does the writer introduce Khalid Kaki and “Operation Daniel” as a good example of a dystopian society?
Is there a clear thesis statement that shows what the writer will focus on throughout the essay?
Is the second paragraph a summary of “Operation Daniel”?
Is it succinct?
Is it is 6-8 sentences? Is it cited at the end of the paragraph?
Does the rest of the body of the essay answer the claim/s from the thesis?
Is at least one of these points covered in the body of the essay? :
o explain what dystopian traits Kaki uses to create his dystopia and/or… o explain whether or not Kaki’s view of the world that he creates in his
short story represents a critical and relevant commentary on society and the world as we know it and/or…
o explain whether you think this type of society could happen in the near future and why or why not.
Is there at least one direct quote from the story used?
Are all quotes and paraphrases cited?

Conclusion
Does the writer revisit their hook?
Does the writer reiterate their thesis statement?
Does the writer provide some sort of clincher statement about the topic?
What is the best part of this essay?
What is your overall feedback?

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