Here are the issues that needs to made on the paper that I have attached:
You need to
beef up your thesis statement. Spell out what you’ll be addressing (both sides)
concisely. Also your citations are vague. You mention King and then the date.
Is that from the letter from birmingham jail? Just say that and what page. Also
on Sartre, I do not recognize a source at all. You throw a name in there, but
was that assigned? I don’t see anything from 13 Theories textbook. That is the assigned
material. You can bring this home and as I said, your writing is solid but you
are not at an A here. But you’ve got some solid opinion here, no doubt. But
somethings need straightened out as I mentioned.
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