Below the comments that I received for my essay so I will need some help to restructure it to fit into the critireas shared by the instructor.
The essay shows some understanding of
the themes and concepts covered in the module, but insufficient ability to
apply them to answer the question chosen. The essay does not answer the question that ask you to discuss
if the migration crisis represents the greatest challenge to the stability of
the EU. In order to answer it, you should have presented the other side of the
argument. Moreover, you could have compared the impact of the migration crisis
with the one of other issues that pose a threat to the stability of the EU.
The assignment
contains some interesting points on migration, but it tends to be extremely
descriptive. The argument is not sufficiently developed and not clearly
presented. I strongly encourage you to work more on this point.
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