ASSIGNMENT: Review the in-text comments and summary feedback you received on your Touchstone 2.2 draft to deepen and extend your analysis of your topic. Submit a revision of your Touchstone 2.2 draft that reflects the feedback.
FEEDBACK:
This is a good start. You have many great insights.
Next steps:
Focus on structure and organization.
For your thesis, tell your reader what this ad communicates to the consumer and how. Does it tell the consumer that this is an elite, luxury product, perhaps? Also, indicate which points you intend to examine in each body paragraph.
Make sure each paragraph includes a concise topic sentence that focuses the paragraph and orients the reader. A topic sentence is the first line of a body paragraph. It basically tells the reader what the paragraph will be about.
For each body paragraph, state the connection between the supporting details and the thesis statement.
You’re on the right track. Good luck with revisions.FEEDBACK:
This is a good start. You have many great insights.
Next steps:
Focus on structure and organization.
For your thesis, tell your reader what this ad communicates to the consumer and how. Does it tell the consumer that this is an elite, luxury product, perhaps? Also, indicate which points you intend to examine in each body paragraph.
Make sure each paragraph includes a concise topic sentence that focuses the paragraph and orients the reader. A topic sentence is the first line of a body paragraph. It basically tells the reader what the paragraph will be about.
For each body paragraph, state the connection between the supporting details and the thesis statement.
You’re on the right track. Good luck with revisions.
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