While the prompt encourages you to look for “new” solutions, or solutions new to you, I didn’t mean to insinuate that the essay was to be written in first person. (“I …” or “to me.”) I went over this in class: college essays of this type are written in third person, with a more neutral tone. We assume the ideas are those of the writer. Work through the essay and take out the “to me” and “I statements.” Though, I will say that the paper flows well, and is consistent in tone.

While the prompt encourages you to look for “new” solutions, or solutions new to you, I didn’t mean to insinuate that the essay was to be written in first person. (“I …” or “to me.”) I went over this in class: college essays of this type are written in third person, with a more neutral tone. We assume the ideas are those of the writer. Work through the essay and take out the “to me” and “I statements.” Though, I will say that the paper flows well, and is consistent in tone.

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