College student/freshman should not be allowed to have jobs

1). first year srudent s making the transition ro college need to focus on their studies,not money.(Thesis Statment)
2).While its true some students have to work to support themselves.(concession)
3).they could limit their work hours to part time or take out extra loan money.(Rufastration)
this a start of how the argument paper could go

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