You are to go through this essay and fix the errors of the previous writer. The citations are not complete. Everything needs to be cited , if it is a fact or knowledge from an article it needs to be cited. As well as some citations were done wrong. Additionally , would appreciate overall writing improvements to it as well.
I have attached the paper , as well as the original instructions so you know what it is about and how the flow is meant to be.
Please add additional resources, I say 8 required as a MINIMUM. All information found online MUST be cited. From sentences such as. ” Prison sentences are imposed disproportionately, and indigenous people are highly affected by longer sentences leading to over-incarceration. ” and ” Self-destructive behaviors such as criminality are coping mechanisms that result in over-incarceration ” to direct quotes : it all must be cited. I point out those 2 sentences specifically as I recall those exact words being in sources I provided yet they are not cited.
This is an academic research paper, and the way it is written does not sound at a University level. Please do what is needed to elevate it. Take extra work for legal realm and poverty paragraphs.
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