For the first five pages here are the details:
What if I looked deeper at the main character herself, the governess. Instead of focusing on the individual situations of ghost encounters on the surface, what if I were to analyze her as being a monster concealed behind the protector. For example, discussing the horror from the children’s point of view where the woman who is supposed to be their guardian, slowly loses her grasp with reality and eventually murders one of the kids. Would this be a better way of looking at the text and evaluating the horror aspects? It would still be a psychoanalytic paper, only now it will focus primarily on the governess and her inner struggles and how these repressed feelings/actions manifest.
Your initial draft comprises your creature’s brain, the skull pan you fit it into, and the face that it will be showing the world. Capture your audience’s attention and pique interest. You don’t want readers or viewers to sputter, “My God, what is that thing? It’s deformed!” Instead, you want to inspire interest and admiration for a cute, well-put-together “head” to your essay. As the brain, your first 5 pages should make clear your argument. Issues relevant to “argument” include scope, objectives, purpose, and audience. Be more focused than a book-length topic, but broad enough to allow some exploration at this early stage in the creature’s development. Consider critical context. Reading secondary sources (and in some cases, primary sources) helps you focus and find a good argumentative thread. So this initial phase of the writing should mention a couple of outside texts you’ve been reading, two at least. Again, the emphasis for this draft ought to be on producing a clear line of argument with an appropriate scope.
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