Paragraph One: Revelation with himself
Points:
He got kicked out of school and talked about how kids don’t like him
He came back and “couldn’t control his fists”.
Through brain scans he found out that he can control his emotion
Paragraph Two: His goal of becoming more like his mother
Points:
Introduction sentence to him watching his mothers videos and being inspired
Drawing fundraiser to raise money for animals becoming extinct
The use of brain scans to become more like his mother
Protests at the government building
Paragraph Three: His fall
Points:
The fact that his fundraiser made little money compared to how much rich people could donate
The stopping of brains scans and how he reverted to his old self
His death from trying to help the environment
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