Format:
Please review format for submission. Follow the paragraph formatting in the template.
Sources:
You need to fix your source formatting, it does not satisfy the requirements of APA 7 Citation.
Please make sure to include in-text citation in your Second Quarter Submission. This serves as your warning that if you submit your work without in-text citation, you will automatically receive a 68 and a Formal Warning for Plagiarism.
Word Choice:
Improve in word-choice by looking over your adjectives and adverbs; try to use stronger descriptive words. Try to review the verbs/nouns you used and be more precise (e.g. The horse jumped -> The horse galloped)
Voice:
Improve voice and sentence fluency by using more diverse sentence-construction that showcase personality and unique writing-style instead of making your work sound monotonous and robotic.
Ideas:
This is a very interesting topic. 🙂 You turned a unique passion into an intriguing topic.
Essay needs further explanation and development of ideas. Use concrete and well-explained examples to illustrate your point instead of just mentioning examples in passing. Try reaching 1,000 words in the word-count.
Organization:
Transition between paragraphs and ideas need to be improved.
Hook needs to be more effective/creative.
Conclusion needs to be stronger.
Sentence Fluency:
Some sentences need to be revised due to awkward phrasing.
Grammar:
Please proofread/spell-check your work for minor grammatical errors.
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