revise paper and what I need to fix!
-Great comparisons/contrasts throughout this paper but they are all briefly stated, with no
direct quotations from either text to illustrate the points you are making. I would actually suggest cutting down the topics you raise here and sticking with the three you raise in the thesis–indecisiveness, obsession, and tragic elements. With only three, you could devote more
time and detail to each.
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