Describe measures taken by political leaders in your chosen country to democratize its political process.

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The country I chose is Egypt.
Course Project: For the phased research and writing assignments, you will be asked to choose a country currently in the process of democratization and address the following in the context of the last ten years:
Describe measures taken by political leaders in your chosen country to democratize its political process.
Describe the ways in which the country’s political leaders have resisted democratization.
Analyze the progress of your chosen country, based on criteria by Dahl or Diamond noted in the above articles.
The process of democratization brings about both support and resistance. To begin, read the following articles:
Kissane, B. (2014, February 22). Few have ever doubted the quality of Robert Dahl’s work. Retrieved from The London School of Economics: https://blogs.lse.ac.uk/europpblog/2014/02/22/few-have-ever-doubted-the-quality-of-robert-dahls-work/ )
Diamond, L. (2013, Winter).Why wait for democracy? Retrieved from The Wilson Quarterly: https://www.wilsonquarterly.com/quarterly/winter-2013-is-democracy-worth-it/why-wait-for-democracy/