Describe the challenges that this group of students face that impact their college success.

This is my assignment. 🙂
First-generation college students usually have a different experience than continuing-generation college students. Describe the challenges that this group of students face that impact their college success. What solution is there, if any? And, whose problem is this to fix? The government? The schools (high school and/or college)? The students and/or parents? You may use the article: “First-Generation College Students Are Not Succeeding” by Kavitha Cardoza and Steele’s text, Whistling Vivaldi, to strengthen your explanation. You may use your own experience as a college student as an example, but this is not a must. Though you may choose to include your experience as a college student, take care to ensure that you do not make this essay a narrative (an essay about yourself) by limiting the use of an anecdote/personal story to just one instance in the essay. To reiterate, this essay is asking you to do several things:

Address and discuss the challenges that first-generation college students face.
How do these challenges impact this group’s success in college?
Who is responsible for fixing this?
What solution do you think would work, if even a by a small margin?
Do you have one example or experience to share in one of your body paragraphs?

Requirements: Use the article provided for you, “First-Generation College Students Are Not Succeeding” as your source along with Whistling Vivaldi as your evidence for your essay
MLA format
The final draft of at least 1,250 words

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Whistling Vivaldi is a book about stereotype threats
https://www.washingtonpost.com/posteverything/wp/2016/01/20/first-generation-college-students-are-not-succeeding-in-college-and-money-isnt-the-problem/?noredirect=on

↑Above link is the article we must use.

First Generation College Students Graduation Rates

First-Generation Students

↑Above link is reference I used

I asked the school tutor to edit my draft, but I didn’t fix it because I didn’t understand it and it was difficult. Just in case you can refer to it, I will attach my draft and corrective instructions. I would appreciate it if you could revise it in a way that would make the writing better. Particularly difficult for me was the use of sources, word selection, content development, structure, and conclusion.

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