Describe the revisions that you made to this piece in as much detail as possible and briefly explain why you made each revision.

Make sure that your essay has a create a clear thesis statement; a compelling introduction, coherent paragraphs, and a strong conclusion. Proofread your essay carefully before you submit! The final essay draft should be at least two pages in length.
In addition to the final essay, you need to complete the attached Revision Work Sheet and submit along with your essay. Essays submitted without the worksheet will not be considered

Revision Work Sheet

Title of piece:

Describe the revisions that you made to this piece in as much detail as possible and briefly explain why you made each revision.

Discuss the ways in which you feel these revisions improve the paper.

Discuss the approach that you took in revising this paper.

Talk about what you’ve learned about your own writing as a result of working on a revision of this essay.

Essay has an introduction that contains a clear thesis statement, coherent paragraphs that transition logically, and presents a strong conclusion. The student also submits a revision worksheet to explain his/her revision choA clear difference can be seen between the first journal entry and the revision. Through an explanation on the revision worksheet, it is clear that the writer understands how to recognize and improve an essay

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