Do you find Paul Marx argument in favor of paying student athletes convincing? why or why not

Essay # 3 “Economics and College Sports”
Reading: All material in Elements, chapter 20
Writing: Write an essay on one of the following questions from the chapter’s end: page 511–#1, #4, or #5
Due dates: Outline (must include thesis) 6/28
Final draft 7/1
Length: 800-900 words
This essay must be in the following format:
typed
double spaced
written in MLA format (see Handbook 431)
submitted through Canvas in a pdf or Word file.
outline and thesis are due same day 7/1
URL for book access :
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If its easier to send screenshot of the actual article, i can do that too
Thesis
Does it indicate the essay’s topic?
Does it indicate the essay’s purpose?
Does it make an active assertion?
Does it use specific language?
Is it too broad or too narrow for this essay’s length requirements?
Outline
Do the major sub-divisions support the thesis?
Are the sub-divisions of the same level of generality?
Is there any overlap? (Bad.)
Is there a clear pattern of development or organization?
If this is a formal outline, does it follow proper format (parallelism, capitalization, punctuation, more than one level per entry)?
Is it too broad or too narrow for this essay’s length requirements?

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