Does the paper include quotations from the essay or article that the paper is discussing?

Peer Review the attached two Pappers in two separate doc by answering the questions below:
Provide responses to the questions below in the spaces provided.

1. What is your first impression of this draft? What do you like best about the draft? (60 words.)
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2. Comment specifically on the introduction: What is effective about it? What suggestions can you make on how to improve it? (60 words.)
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3. What do you think is the author’s thesis or main point? How could it be expressed or supported more effectively? (60 words.)

Sample Thesis Statements

Although Smith makes a range of assertions that he does not adequately support, his balanced use of anecdotal and statistical evidence; his organizational pattern, which increases the impact of his stories and statistics; and his witty, satirical tone combine to create a credible and persuasive argument.

Although Smith’s wide-ranging use of anecdotal evidence is entertaining, the larger argument lacks sufficient support; in particular, the organization lacks structure, and he adopts an inappropriate tone at times, thereby compromising the argument’s overall sense of credibility, or ethos.
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4. Do the topic sentences for main-body paragraphs present a clear point or claim? If not, what revisions are needed? (60 words.)
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5. How well does the paper use key terms for assignment 2 (for example, audience, purpose, and context as well as ethos, pathos, and logos. Also, the “5 As”—allusion, analogy, anecdote, assertion, and authority.)? Are any terms missing or not fully addressed? Are they applied such a way so as not to appear like a “list”? (70 words.)
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6. Does the paper include quotations from the essay or article that the paper is discussing? Are these quotations effective? Why or why not? Are there too many? Are there not enough? Are any quotations too long? (60 words.)
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8. Does the conclusion do more than just summarize? Does it focus on the larger significance of the topic and the effectiveness of the author’s approach to it? (60 words.)
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