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Your introduction does a great deal of what is referred to as “forecasting.” Do not tell your reader what the paper will do–simply do it. The method of writing you are employing is appropriate for philosophy or history or business classes, but not for a WCI class. You need to go back and revise these areas. This note is true for all future papers.
Overall, the paper is well done. I can tell that you are used to APA, based on the way that you are more inclined to reference than to directly quote.
Be careful not to have stand-alone quotes (as this occurs here and there). Try to find opportunities where you might use a direct quote in place of a reference–especially when you are referring to statistics.
Otherwise, this is a well-written paper.
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