Hi,Actually, I have completed my PhD dissertation writing, but the committee members have concerns about some points, and I need your help to improve/expand them.1- In page 18, add additional depth and background on Saudi Vision 2030 to the Literature Review, and make them in good connections and transitions in the text. (half page).2- In page 41, explain how the grounded theory actually used in the study and how themes developed by using Grounded Theory. (half page)3- In page, add additional information on reflexivity and saturation in the Methods section. (one page).4- Present differences between male and female participants in the Results and expand on the findings in the Discussion.In the results, only a few things were added about gender differences. Some of it (cooking viewed as a female hobby) should have a source. A more comprehensive discussion is needed. In the Discussion, only a few things were added. It needs more in both Results and Discussion, but more importantly, it needs more thought-out conclusions ( You can add some sentences in appropriate and associated spaces in finding or discussion chapters) (total of them one page or so).5- Expand the explanation of the implications of this study in the Discussion section. Make a stronger case to answer the “so what” question and provide specific recommendations for different constituencies (for instance address implications for activists, government, businesses, universities). ( 2 pages).6- In page 102, I added gender differences as future areas of study but it needs be more context.Please be IN DEPTH IN as much as you can in all next added works!! and Any changes or addings need to be tracked via Track Changes in MS Word or any other distinguished way to help me knowing all added works.I have attached the draft of dissertation.Please let me know if you have any questions.Comments from CustomerDiscipline: media and mass communication
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