[Notes for Rewriting]
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Complete the paper claim — do not leave the ellipses in the paper claim!
Fill out the ellipses in order to form a draft claim. (Send it to me when you can.)
A strong draft! Here are some suggestions for the next one:
The novel emphasizes that Naranappa is not worthy of Chandri – that much most readers would know.
This draft raises a much more important interpretive: why does she care for him?
He objectified her – she allows it. His society treats her terribly – she still participates in it.
Why does she do so?
Explain why Chandri do what she does in the novel? For example, there is little discussion of why she attempts to convince Naranappa not to take her food when they have first started living together.
I look forward to the next version of this promising project!
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