How do the writers in ‘Disabled’ and ‘The Story of an Hour’ use language and structure to portray despair and lack of control?

It compares 2 texts, this is the topic question: How do the writers in ‘Disabled’ and ‘The Story of an Hour’ use language and structure to portray despair and lack of control?

I just need it to be improved, as I scored around 53% on it. you have the original version, the version graded by the teacher and the mark scheme

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