Below is the essay that needs to be revised.
“You need to work on a formal tone and better transitions throughout your paper. You need more evidence here to support your stance. You have some good pieces, but you need to make sure you are using proper in text citations for all the evidence given. You have grammar and wording mistakes throughout your paper. ” this is the feedback.
Also I need to use an infographic as one of my evidences and it should be attached to the document.
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