Is the thesis clear in every genre?

This is where you will submit the first draft of 2 genres and their endnotes and where you will upload your peer review in the comments box. Remember that the first draft is worth 100 points and the peer review is worth 60. They will be graded separately, so don’t worry if your grade seems low at first.
**Here is the peer review for the Multi-Genre project. Please answer these questions THOROUGHLY. Also, feel free to mark up your partner’s work.**
1. Is the thesis clear in every genre?
2. Is the argument presented effectively and appropriately for the chosen genre?
3. Is the language appropriate for the chosen genre?
4. How well does the writer use ethos, pathos, and logos in each genre?
5. Is the genre appropriate for the topic?
6. Are the endnotes written professionally (no jargon, no misspellings)? Are they clear? Do they provide the reader with informative points that their genres could not?
7. What are the writer’s strengths and weaknesses in each of these drafts?

my subject
The subject of several of my genres is the relationship between the child and the parents. I decided to choose this topic because I believe that respect, intimacy, and a healthy relationship are very important in the family. Many families do not live together and have no pleasure in living together. The absence of parents has a bad psychological effect on the child in the long run. I also want to talk about the child’s emotional problems in the family and what problems parental absence has in the child’s life. My dissertation statement for this project will be: What problems and bad consequences will the absence of parents at home and family have for the child in the future?
For Category A, I plan to use interview and article genres, and I want to interview my dad’s family. My father had many problems in his family and the absence of parents in his family had many problems for him that had a behavioral and emotional impact on my father. And I choose the article because I want to do more research on the impact of emotional and psychological problems and share solutions to those problems. For category B, I intend to use a brochure / booklet or logo / crown / badge to show the effects of parental absence in the family and the problems of the child and parents, and the feelings and relationships between them.
my professro said
Your thesis needs to be phrased as a debatable argument. As it stands now, it’s not a thesis, but rather, a question. Use the formula I gave you.

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