Paper Draft – Introduction, Methods and Proposed statistics.

Using the topic and Lit research found in the uploaded file, write an introduction, Method and Result pages.
Using these corrections, write a draft paper.
1) Your IVs and DV are all well thought out. However, I worry that your DV might be a little too specific. If you want to keep it like this, you might want to give emphasis in the paper that penalty shoot-out is a stressful and pressuring situation.
2) Zhao & Pan (2022) paper shows that intervention increased self-efficacy. Therefore, you can use this paper to explain the relationship between intervention and self-efficacy. Be mindful that this does not explain how self-efficacy increases the performance of the penalty kicks.
3) It looks like there are several types of interventions that you describe in the short lit review: positive intervention, and self-resilience interventions. However, there is only 1 IV and 2 levels (intervention and no intervention). Are these interventions all included in one intervention?
4) This is just a suggestion but how about having a presence of intervention (intervention/ no intervention) as your IV and your DV as resilience, operationalized by success rates of penalty kicks?? Looks like most of your papers are related to intervention and resilience.
5) I think you did great writing a short lit review. It is VERY impressive. I would consider reorganizing some of the ideas so it is more structured. For example, for the introduction, you can start with the definition of self-efficacy, and resilience -> give a brief explanation of what the intervention is and its positive effects on self-efficacy and resilience (cite papers that support this claim) -> end with a research question and your hypothesis.

Last Completed Projects