Read the body paragraph below and answer the following questions to determine whether it presents clear ideas. The thesis statement is also included to determine whether the body paragraph stays on-topic or if it goes off-topic.

Thesis: Out of all the places that I’ve been, Colombia was the best because of the culture, nature, and independence I had while traveling.

Body Paragraph 02: There are many mountains and valleys. Colombia has so much nature everywhere you go. In fact, this country has almost every climate imaginable including mountains, deserts, beaches, valleys, and jungles. It really depends on which region of the country you are in. Looking at a map you would never expect that! Whether I was in a city or traveling between cities, the tropical plants and trees would remind me of home. The national government invests significant amounts into transportation. One of my favorite reasons for traveling to Colombia will always be the nature.

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