Refine the following thesis statement if possible..

The book, to summarize is about a boy who looks for their sister when she goes missing, however the police do not help him and he has to go look for her on his lonesome.

1. Refine the following thesis statement if possible.
“Changes must be made to the police force in some areas, especially where the crime rate is high as a significant group of officers stigmatize people with a shade of darker skin, susceptible to corruption, and often forget why their jobs are important.”

2. write out the essay (550 words minimum) using this link as a guide line. make any edits if you would like to.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GNJRLvxZZzO_3vKeH_U5dIWNWFi-N_Mt3h-i9jlcvW0/edit

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