This assignment is about editing the Research Proposal, I have attached how the professor is going t grade it and the annotated bibliography.
Here’s what you are going to edit:
add the title, abstract, and keywords.
Expand the introduction, it’s only three review paragraphs, add three more paragraphs.
Remove significance and background subsections titles.
The first paragraph has no citations, so please add some in-text citations, 2nd paragraph has only 1 citation, also add more to that one as well. add in-text citations in the third paragraph as it doesn’t contain any.
– Although you use the word hypothesis, there is not one. You don’t test “a number of different methods.” You need to be very explicit.
– Reduce extraneous wording and even un-needed sentences such as “The research will employ an experimental research method.” Instead, just state the design.
– Half the method are redundant. Need much more detail on experimental protocols.
No need for expected results. Condense schedule, it is taking up too much space.
– on the reference section add more citations from the annotated bibliography and please make sure it’s peer-reviewed.
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