The Battle of Somme

The Research Essay must address the social, political, and/or the historical implications of the chosen topic. The Research essay must be at least 600 words but no more than 700 words. Each essay must be written in MLA Format. All papers must be submitted as MS Word file (.doc or .docx) with an originality report of 30% or below

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You May proceed on your writing your research paper because I think you are close. Please fine-tune the things below or your paper will not be as strong as desired. Be sure not to use it and this in your paper as you did in your topic submission.
Thesis Statement:
I see a strong thesis. Your thesis purpose shows support. Make sure that you do not make the mistake that some do and speak in broad lofty terms and then their thesis is not sufficiently proven in the actual writing. Make sure Your sources align and support your thesis.
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Primary Sources:
Good Primary Sources. Make sure your primary sources drive the implications that you draw from for your research. I am not looking for summarizations and do not want to see direct quotes.
Academic Journals:
Your academic journals are good. Also, use the expertise shown in your academic journals as an example on how to write your implications.
You may want to select additional primary sources and academic journals if you cannot get a lot from the primary sources you found to support your thesis. Please do not add any sources that are not either Primary sources or academic journal articles.
Remember to use parenthetical citations in your actual paper, also known as in-text citations in your actual research essay. Listing the sources at the end is not sufficient.

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