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The first four books listed are all the Law of Attraction by Jenny Loveless with different descriptions. Evolve Your Brain: The Science of Changing Your Mind is listed three times, and Let The Universe Help You!, Quantum Physics for Beginners, and Jack Canfield’s Key to Living the Law of Attraction are all listed twice. Is this intentional? Each book should only be listed once, and descriptions should be kept to a few paragraphs at most.
A good amount of the information from your review of literature would be more applicable to your findings section, which is supposed to be the longest section in your dissertation. The findings section should contain some quotes from your books in addition to the paraphrased and summarized material, all of which should be properly cited. For information about in-text citations please see https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/research_and_citation/mla_style/mla_formatting_and_style_guide/mla_in_text_citations_the_basics.html Since I’m sure it would take a great deal of work to locate each piece of information from each book you do not need to include page numbers.
Also, I noticed a couple sentences from your introduction being repeated in your discussion. Please review your paper and be sure that thoughts and ideas are expressed in new ways in the different sections of your paper. Your introduction, personal relevance, and discussion are otherwise all good to go. Your personal relevance was especially inspiring. I thoroughly enjoyed reading about how using the principles of the law of attraction had impacted your life in so many positive ways!
Please make the referenced changes and resubmit your dissertation. Yours will be top priority for review once we receive the updated version.
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