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https://www.wheaton.edu/academics/services/writing-center/writing-resources/paragraph-unity-coherence-and-development/
Directions: In a Microsoft Word or PDF-compatible document, rewrite the following paragraphs to make them unified and coherent.
supposed to rewrite these 2 down below
Paragraph #1- College can be expensive and difficult. Critical thinking is a very important skill for college students to develop so that they can be successful in their careers. Employers look for graduates who can understand information, analyze data, and solve problems. They also want employees who can think creatively and communicate their ideas clearly. College students need to practice these skills in all of their classes so that they can demonstrate their abilities to potential employers.
Paragraph #2- There are different types of pets people might introduce into their homes. Cats and dogs are among the most popular types of household pets. Of course, some people hate animals. Some people choose pets based on their looks or behaviors, while others pick pets based on their size. Dogs provide excellent companionship, while cats are independent and require little attention. Dogs do well in active households and may need outdoor space. Cats can thrive in most environments and may not need a backyard area. In a zoo, large animals, like polar bears, are left to themselves in their cages. Overall, people should pick pets that best suit their lifestyles.
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