The thesis was delivered last semester but it still had some corrections to be done in order to be accepted by the university, the format I will let you know, there is only needed to do some corrections. Check the next points for corrections:
*In recent years, with the intensification of global climate change, research related to green development has more and more important theoretical value and practical significance. The main research objective of this paper is how Mexico is performing in terms of CO2 emission reduction and mitigation compared to the rest of the world. The objects of comparative study in this paper include: China and France, because the former is the largest carbon dioxide emitter in the atmosphere, and the latter is located in Europe, and the existing carbon emission research on European countries is still insufficient. The article uses publicly available data from various sources for quantitative research. This paper systematically expounds the management of carbon dioxide emissions in the international trade of these three countries, and draws conclusions through comparative analysis. The article argues that countries can use a variety of approaches to manage greenhouse gas emissions. This paper focuses on emissions trading systems and nationally determined contributions and how countries use them to manage their emissions. The article found that Mexico lags behind in carbon dioxide emissions management compared to several other countries in the world. On the whole, the topic selection of the article has relatively positive theoretical value and practical significance. The structure of the article is relatively reasonable, the analysis logic is relatively clear, the data and materials are relatively detailed, the analysis and demonstration are relatively sufficient, the use of research methods is relatively appropriate, and the main conclusions and inspirations more reliable. The article basically meets the standard of a master’s thesis
*The paper attempts to study how Mexico deals with carbon emissions in international trade and compares the carbon emissions policies of France and China. The research method of the dissertation is simple. Apart from simply stacking some facts, it fails to carry out a meaningful theoretical or empirical analysis of the research problem. There is a big gap between the thesis format and the master’s thesis format standard.
*. As a master’s thesis, the research method is far from the standard of a master’s thesis. The topic of the thesis is too large and lacks focus. The paper compares Mexico with China and France, but does not convincedly explain why France and China are compared when studying Mexico? What do France and China have in common with Mexico in terms of carbon emissions? Why does the French and Chinese experience make sense for Mexico?
*. The writing logic of the paper needs to be greatly improved *. There are a lot of problems with the format of the paper, which further reflects the lack of rigor in the process of writing the paper by the author of the paper. For example, in Table 4.1 of the paper’s list of tables, c02 should be co2; Section 1.4 of the paper has serious formatting problems with the indentation of the first line, etc.
*Most of the charts in the thesis do not conform to the format specifications: the naming of the charts is arbitrary; the data of the charts have the problem of no units, and so on.
*.The depth of the research in the article is not enough. The comparison of the three countries is a mere formality, which is highlighted in 4.4. Empirical research in the economic sense is not used here, but only the comparison of data. The credibility and logic of the argument are both. There are obvious problems.
*Policy recommendations should follow conclusions. Friendly reminder to tutors and degree points: This paper needs to be significantly revised before defense, otherwise it is very likely to be judged as an unqualified paper during the random inspection process on the platform of the school, province and even the Ministry of Education after the defense. No need to meet words requirement, just change the content to meet a Master’s degree qualifications.
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Aug 7, 3:23 AM
Some point that needs to be changed is the statistics I made, they need to look more professional.
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