What impact that brings from Nestorian Christians to Mongolia, and which further benefit Europe?

I need to write a research papar based on the document called “Primary Resource”. The file “Passages for Primary Source Research Paper” is some passages I find to be useful in the essay. All the requirements are in the “Final Primary Source Research Paper”. There need to be a research question based on the primary source essay.

My research question was “Why and how did William of Rubruck missionize Nestorian Christians to Mongolia？ What impact that brings from Nestorian Christians to Mongolia, and which further benefit Europe?”. However, the comments from my professor was “The passages you cite here are really great and come from reliable and strong sources. My only concern at this point is that your question seems much too vague and is probably much too large for a paper this short. I would encourage you to return to your text and try to locate a few very specific details or moments in the text that confuse, surprise or interest you and orient your question to try to explain why that detail makes sense. The work you’ve already done will help you as you move into the final paper, but a more specific and concrete question will make your paper much more coherent and feasible.”

Could you improve my research question and let me know before you start writing the essay? Thanks

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