The paper needs to be rewritten according to the comments given. Minimum 10 sources are required but you can increase the number of sources. It is a research paper so everything should be backed up by secondary research in brackets beside the sentence.
The main focus of the paper is the background and problems of the beauty industry in Pakistan. A connection can be made to India but the focus should be on Pakistan.
The new paper should have the topics reconstructed like this.
Key:
H = Heading
SH = Sub-Heading
H – Historical Background
SH – Background
SH – Effects of colonisation
H – Importance of Beauty
SH – What is beauty?
SH – What is the importance of beauty standards in the society today?
H – Influence of Social Media on the beauty industry
SH – Social Media
SH – Effect it has on the society
Last Completed Projects
| topic title | academic level | Writer | delivered |
|---|