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Essay One Final Draft – due Monday, October 17,
11:59pm
Please use this link to upload the final draft of Essay One.
Remember to use the sample essay to help you format:
1. Include your name, date, word count, and assignment name at the top left corner of your essay
2. Include page numbers at the top right of your essay
3. Include the title
4. Include the subtitles
5. Use 12 point font
6. Use 1″ margins
7. Double space your entire essay
8. Make sure you have 1,500 words minimum
9. Proofread your draft and review the directions handout for this essay to make sure you responded to the assignment.
THIS IS MY TEACHERS RESPOND TO MY DRAFT.
Neue Leung
September 30, 2022 at 11:42 AM
Saleh,
Thank you for submitting your draft on time. I appreciate that shared your experiences with me, but you still need to develop your identities throughout your essay.
Think about:
-How did your identities evolve?
-What are your identities? Name those that you are comfortable sharing.
-How did your parents’ background impact your identities and experiences?
The second half of the essay which falls under the second subtitle should focus on what your learned and your growth based off of the identities you would have written about in the first part of your essay. By doing this, it will make your essay coherent.
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As a reminder, to meet the purpose of this essay, you need to explore and be explicit with those identities you are willing to share.
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