Your task is to proof read and edit this already written essay based on the following prompt. My instructor has given me feedback saying my word choice and sentence structure in some areas is too basic for university level and that I do not transition well from idea to idea. They suggested revisiting/revamping my essay to make it designed for a higher level and make it easer to read/make more sense. Attached you will find the source work needed to cite from and where I cite front plus the completed essay I already have that you will be revising.
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