“Research Paper Feedback.” Please also addressed these points that have been mentioned by the professor. “1. Timeframe – your thesis suggests that distribution of power and polarity matters for solving the world’s problems, but throughout the paper, you have not actually stated at what points you think the world is unipolar and/or multi/bi-polar. This becomes problematic when discussing the US’ position on climate change or nuclear proliferation – you hop around time periods without clarifying polarity and its impact. Fixing this may require some re-organization – you need to focus on when was the US hegemonic and when did that end; and how did that affect its position on these two crucial issues (climate and nukes)? Another way to think of this is whether the distribution of power in the world was substantially different during the Kyoto negotiations as they were during the Paris negotiations. 2. You need to clarify and delve more deeply into the UN position during these negotiations; who was leading on Kyoto or Paris, and how did the US participate in these negotiations? 3. You seem to suggest at times that the beliefs of the US President/domestic ideology matter more than polarity – if the willingness of the US to solve these problems is more highly related to who is President than the distribution of power, perhaps that is more important? If this is not the case, you need to show how polarity affects all US administrations regardless of their beliefs. So, even if Biden is more committed to fighting climate change than Trump or Bush, they both faced a multipolar system that may have restricted their ability to solve these problems. 4. Identify clearly, at the outset, your main takeaways – once a reader has read the work, what are the three basic points you want them to know. You should be able to do this in a few sentences.” As a result, you should address two things: First, please address the issues which have been mentioned in the file I have attached. Second, please write what the professor recommended. Thank you ever so much. Sincerely,
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