I need help editing my personal statement. I am applying to Marist University’s- MA Integrated Marketing Communications program. The paper should be no more than 500 words. I have attached a draft of what I’ve written so far but would also like my paper to incorporate some of the language used on its website to show that I have thoroughly reviewed the expectations of this program. I have attached my resume to show my work experience. I am entry-level and a recent college graduate so I don’t have a lot of experience in the field or a set career path yet but am certain this is the route I want to go within the communications and marketing world and feel this program will position me for opportunities.
Here’s the link to the school’s page for further detail: (please click below link)
https://www.marist.edu/communication-arts/graduate/marketing-comm?utm_medium=SEM&utm_source=UDM&utm_campaign=Marketing-Comm&gclid=CjwKCAjwiLGGBhAqEiwAgq3q_nwBFf15YR8DSR_wEDRze2CSRVPfDBTWSnk2yjUbXn9XwlHY0kwB8RoCbe8QAvD_BwE&gclsrc=aw.ds